I was glad that we split half way through as i feel that it has given us both a chance to explore our own roots and both persue different challenges and techniques. This overall ended up in two completely different film openings. Karl has given me feedback below:
My opinions for what i thought of his final idea for the film opening are on his blog; www.stcmkhpp.blogspot.com
We both agreed that eachother's final ideas were very good in terms of quality, filming & editing techniques, and creativity, from what we first had decided to do. We are happy with our final products we had both made, and enjoyed watching eachother's film openings.
1: Age 2: Where are you from
3: Male or Female
4: What films do you normally watch
5: What do you like to see in a film 6: What is the best part about this film opening
7: What is the worst part of this film opening
8: Rate out of 10 how enjoyable this was to watch
9: What needs to be improved the most
10: Would you watch it again
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1: 25 ans
2: France ( Paris )
3: Male
4: All
5: Ambiance
6: the end ;)
7: no one
8: 7/10
9: music to create a dramatic ambient
10: Why not ;)
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1. 16
2. United Kingdom
3. Male
4. Comedy/Horror
5. Good acting
6. The fact that it's in black and white
7. Unsteady camera
8. 8/10
9. Unsteady camera
10. Probably
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1. 20
2. Estonia
3. Female
4. Everything
5. Unexpected endings
6. Car and gunz :D and ofc the point in the end
7. Ketchup instead of real bl00d in Pip's face
8. 10/10 for sure
9. The part when you see Connor almost starting to laugh when the guys appear behind him :D it's rather cute but to this film atmosphare he shouldn't laugh :D
10. Of course !
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1: 16
2: Hungary
3: Male
4: Mostly like II.WW films
5: "omfg" ends ^^ (like Saw 1)
6: The car ;D
7: At first music fits well, then it could change a bit as sagaz said
My media product represents a film noir style. After analysing the conventions used in film noir examples, I realised that there are a variety of obscure shot types and usually the use of a voice over, or sinister soundtrack. I tried to include both of these. For example high and low angle shots were used to present inferiority and superiority while connoting the characters power. Other shots were also used frequently, such as close up shots to exaggerate certain events or facial expressions. One example would be when the gun is picked up off the table. I liked my use of voyeurism, for example the shot through the bottles of drink really helps add to the tension by controling the audiences perspective. To make the film as dark as possible, the use of a black and white effect is used throughout the film. Special effects and transitions make the film play through as smoothly as possible. Another example would be slow motion as the two characters walk down the steps.I have also tried to include the use of foreshadowing. When the gun is loaded, it gives the impression that there may be violence in the future and a possible firefight. Amplified sounds are also used to exaggerate the loading of the gun and the car engine as it parks. Considering the term “Film noir” means “Black film”, it was very important to create an atmosphere within the shot as well as just the soundtrack. I found that the key to this was to make sure that to lighting was low key, to give the impression of mystery and to create enigma. There was also a substantial number of subtitles that were used. Transitions were used to help them fade in and out without distracting from the action taking place at the time. Editing effects such as cross dissolves really help the film to run smoothly throughout. For example when the car is parked, a cross dissolve is used to support the parallel editing as it implies by fading the clips into eachother that they are happening at the same time. The editing helps keep the pace, and builds to the climax escpecially towards the gun shot. Fast cuts help create the tension needed for the audience.
My film uses stereotypical characters to give representations. For example clothing is used to represent the thug-like gangster image. Black leather connotes power, but also leather is a tough material. This may suggest that the characters are tough as well. This could possibly connote a typical ‘gangster’ persona, or a simply thug-like representation.
The idea behind the suburban background in the setting would suggest the victim’s status, and may possibly represent his lifestyle. My film however does not inform the audience of the characters status. For example the two characters in leather may be villainous characters, or the roles may have been subverted to make them the hero figures. This is unknown to the audience however at this stage. The Matrix inspired me, as the role of ‘Neo’ is subverted. An outlaw figure is portrayed to be the hero. The use of high angle an low angle shots in my film help the audience to identify with the characters. By giving the audience this sense of empathy, it helps them engage with the content of the film.
My film would not be used as a blockbuster production or anything with such a high status due to the initial genre of the film, but also due to the budget. For example "Universal" would be unlikely distribute my work as it is not designed to be viewed by a wide and mainstream audience. It would more likely be made by a small independant film company and be shown on channels such as E4 or Film Four, for a niche audience.
Even if this film was not produced by a film company or shown on a TV channel, it may still have a large audience simply based on Youtube or have a purely internet fan base.
My audience is closely linked with the audiences from other films. For example my opening film tries to target the same audiences as films such as “Pulp Fiction” and “Payback”.Both films target their audience by keeping the content dark, while using action to keep attention from the audience. I tried to do this with the use of parallel editing and using varied transitions. Due to the nature of the content of the film, the age range of the audience targeted is higher. Personally I feel that my film is more likely to attract the attention from teenagers and young adults. This may have to be the case as the use of blood is used, so if this was to be played on television, it would more likely be shown later in the evening. The mise en scene was a particular strength in attracting my audience. For example, the black clothing and dark mood may possibly suggest a gothic style. The use of special effects and transitions also help. For example the slow motion clips. The use of black and white also helps to attract the audience. As a typical film noir convention, I think it works well with the parallel editing to attract those who are interested in thrillers. The soundtrack and pace of the entire opening really tries to grab any audience’s attention, even those who might not like this type of style.
I have learnt different prosumer software packages and how they work. For example I have learnt how to use Garageband to make my sound mix for the film. This includes sound effects, amplified sounds and of coarse the music itself.This program was vital in the making of this film as I personally feel the sound mix is one of the best qualities of it. I have learnt how to make the sounds perfectly synchronous with my film.
I have also learnt how to use the program iMovie HD 6. Learning how to use this program was paramount to the success of my final production. The vast amount of effects and user-friendly interface makes this program ideal for making a film such as mine. First I had to import my clips from the camera. Then I learnt how to manage them in a timeline. Then I learnt how to use transitions, effects and sounds to aid my work. I also learnt simply how to use a camera affectively. I have learnt about editing techniques such as match on actions an the use of an eyeline match. Also the use of a tripod and how the tripod works was learnt while filming.
I have also learnt the importance of continuity and after making some errors, found out just how careful you have to be when filming.
I have learnt how to film and edit parallel editing and build tension through the use of a soundtrack, camerawork and transitions while still implying representations through the mise en scene.
My preliminary task was far less detailed when concerning production. Simple shots were used to convey a simple purpose. Editing techniques included the standard match on action and the use of the 180-degree rule. The transitions in the preliminary task were very limited and overall i feel it was a weaker film. This however is expected as less time was spent on producing it.
Much more was involved in this film however. For example more planning was involved. A storyboard was made and many group discussions took place. More research into the film noir style and the typical conventions used was made. The filming for ‘Fatal Justice’ is much more advanced as the camera angles had to be more diverse.
As you can see the sound starts fairly quietly but builds as the pace quickens. Then the sound becomes quieter and fades away as the two characters enter the house. Then amplified sounds for the gunshot and loading of the gun, then finishing with the quiet part from the music at the start, to finish at the end, making it a circular soundtrack that relates back to the start.
Close up / Extreme Close up - Gun on the wall. Use of the shadow to make the implication more mysertierious and subtle. However this is also a use of foreshadowing as it implies there may be violence in the future.
Eye line match - when the character looks at the gun on the table and then picks it up in slow motion for dramatic effect.
Again the close up of the guns suggest a firefight but also connotes the power the characters in leather have.
Camera Tilts down to show the valnerability of the character in the chair.
A short series of fast cuts as the tension reaches its peak. Screen becomes dark so the audience are unsure of what really happens.
Close up of blood to confirm the kill and for the audience to see the character's grimace.
Ends fading out - confirming the scene is over - also fade in with the title of the film.
Eye level medium shot - This helps the audience empathise with the character as they are at his level.
High angle long shot - shows more of the current setting which looks obviously suburban and possibly a peaceful place. This suggests this is where the 'good' character lives or the 'victim'.
Voyeurism used - to show character through bottles - film noir effect.
Again some normal cuts to keep pace.
Slow motion close up - feet walking down the steps - build tension and quicken parallel editing.
Over the shoulder shot - helps the audience empathise with the character once again.
Fade out - To signify the end of the parallel editing
Use of subtitles - The use of the subtitles enforce the fact that the video is an opening to a film clip. By positioning them lower on the screen, it still allows the audience clear visibility to the action within the frame. I made sure the colours of the subtitles were white so that the black and white film noir theme was uncompromised. It also does not detract the audiences eye away from the action as much.
High angle shot - shows the characters status and inferiority.
Close up of drinking - shows lighing reflect of glass - film noir style. Also close up of drinking shows the drinking has a specific significance and could possibly suggest that this will have meaning in the future.
Simple cuts - were used to make sure that the pace of the scene is clealy established early on.
Film noir shot - through the glass - possibly connoting he has something to hide as he is shown behind / through the glass. Use of voyeurism to create tension.
Use of cross dissolves - to switch between parallel editing clips. Also for a slight mystery effect.